August 6, 2008

詩七夕

天上歲月
人間幾年

用混擬土 或用鋼筋
也比不上 銀色河流上

鵲兒編織的夢 和承載於上的
戀人的愛 來的牢

讓屈原惋惜著 沉溺不在那條河
讓后羿悔恨著 已經不在的嫦娥

感受不到 戀人滴下的喜悅
只感受到 伊人不在的滄悲

散文:
在天上的每分每秒
會是人間的幾年幾個月?

而在浩瀚銀河上 那由一隻隻鵲兒搭建出來的橋
隨著雛形越來越明顯 想見到那朝思暮想的伊人的夢
就越來越堅定 就跟戀人間 牢不可破的愛一樣
那不是混擬土或鋼筋 所建構出的一切 能比得上的

連屈原都會惋惜 若能沉溺在那條銀河裡
就能感受到 那一年一次
在橋上重逢的戀人 滴下的喜悅眼淚

連后羿也會悔恨 那已經不在身邊的嫦娥
只能感受到 那曾朝朝暮暮
在身邊陪伴的伊人 留下自己的滄桑與哀傷

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