【】請幫我檢查+修改一篇短文翻譯英文
【】請幫我檢查+修改一篇短文翻譯英文e wedding 【10點】請幫我檢查+修改一篇短文翻譯...(英文) 我們學校有一項作業是寫歌劇魅影的後續短文(用英文)雖然我寫出來了,但因為在下的英文非常不好...所以想請各位幫忙修改一下語句,檢查一下文法。
如果真的看不下去可以直接打新的一篇沒關係。
拜託大家了>"<.....謝謝。
魅影自從那之後,依然忘不了克莉絲汀,所以將他的外表做了一個徹底的改變;而在克莉絲汀與勞爾的婚禮的前夕,魅影突然的出現,他用天籟般的歌聲再度征服了克莉絲汀的心;就在進退兩難的抉擇之下,最後克莉絲汀選擇了魅影,雖然勞爾很傷心,但還是祝福克莉絲汀找到幸福。
而魅影和克莉絲汀就到了一個新的小鎮,從此過著幸福快樂的日子。
Phantom still can not forget after that Christine, so he have maked his appearance a change;And the night before last in wedding of Christine and Raoul, Phantom appearance, he used the singing of sounds of nature sort to once more conquer Christine hearts;Under the in a dilemma choice, last Christine chose Phantom, although the Raoul is very sad,but still bless Christine find out happiness.And Phantom with Christine was a lately small town, from now on live a happy day.※請別用翻譯機
Since then, Phantom still can't forget Christine, so he has made his appearance a change; and at wedding of Christine and Raoul eve, Phantom appear out of blue, he victor Christine's heart by beautiful voice again; to face a difficult choice, Christine choosen Phantom at last. Though Raoul was very sad, he still blessed Christine found out happiness. Then Phantom and Christine found a new township, and lived i happy and happiness days.盡力幫你了 ^^
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Evil spirit's shadow was since that, can't still forget Chris court , so has done a thorough change of his appearance; Shortly before Chris court and Lauer's wedding, evil spirit's appearance with unexpected shadow , he has conquered Chris' heart in the court once again with the song like the sounds of nature; Just under the choice in a dilemma, Chris chose evil spirit's shadow in the court finally, though Lauer is very sad, wish Chris court to find the happiness. And evil spirit's shadow and Chris court reached a new small town, the happy life that lived the happiness from then on. 這樣也可以 有很多方法可以表達
After then, Phantom still can't forget Christine. Therefore, he made a big face over. When the night before Christine and Raoul's wedding day, Phantom showed up. He sang to Christine with his amazing voice and captured Christine's heart again . Christine was under the dielmma but she decided to go with Phantom. Raoul was very sad but gave Christine his blessings. Phantom and Christine went to an small town and lived there happy ever after.魅影自從那之後(請再確定一下這句是否有漏字或多字,我直接以"魅影自那時之後"翻譯)希望有幫上忙!
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參考資料:http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qid=1508021102983 e wedding
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