8-2(2) 待改
標示紅色的表示有問題,大部分的句子不夠簡要,請嘗試再修正。 from 老師 本來只是小寐休息的公車司機 Those bus drivers who was taking a nap All too late to flee their lives Strangers who did not know each other previously Not only for surviving But also for the admirable humanity Helped each other on the street 除了大雨還有大旱 Not only heavy rain but we also had droughts. 2009年 東非 2009 in East Africa 同一個時間 At the same time 地球的另一端翻轉陷入了嚴重乾旱 Another hemisphere of earth had suffered from a serious drought. 聯合國估計東非之角 The United Nations reckoned the East Africa. 2009年共有2300萬饑民 There were 2300 people who suffered from hunger in 2009. 無水無糧 No water and no grain 其受難人數及慘狀 The victims and miserable conditions 遠超越過去任何非洲戰爭 were much worse 所帶來的災難 than any other African wars 這是New York Times 9 月7 日 The New York Times carried the African refugees’ photos 所刊登的非洲災民照片 On September 7th 照片中的她說 She said 我不是很老 只是很餓 很渴 I’m not very old; I’m just hungry and thirsty. 2009年森林野火 Forest fire in 2009 從澳洲美國希臘 蔓延至每一塊乾旱的國土 It spread out from Australia , America to Greece . 2009終 At the end of 2009 地球向工業革命發源地發出重大訊息 The earth sent out great warnings to the birthplace of industry revolution. 先是秋天不見了 At first, the autumn was gone. 枝頭上明明還掛著綠葉 Although, the green leaves verb still on the branch, 卻已是大雪紛飛 The heavy snow is everywhere 對我來說,現在開始下雪真的太早了 For me, it is too early to snow at this time 冬天至少還要等20天 Before winter comes at least should be waited for 20 days
全都來不及逃生
原本互不相識的陌生人
為了生存
也是為了了不起的人性
在街頭上彼此協助
