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標示紅色的表示有問題,大部分的句子不夠簡要,請嘗試再修正。 from 老師 台灣不是最糟的 為了平息民怨 菲律賓總統開放 金碧輝煌水晶燈飾的總統府 成為史上最豪華的災民收容中心 In order to comfort citizens, Philippe’s president opened the golden presidential palace to them. The presidential palace with the crystal lamps became the most luxurious care center for those victims of a natural disaster. 2009年土耳其 In 2009, Turkey Although it was not been announced that there are any typhoons There still were disasters on the earth One day on September, in Turkey Suddenly, it rained heavily About two hours The oldest Istanbul wall in the world was drowned
The situation in Taiwan was not the worst.
2009年9月到10月間
Between September to October in 2009
菲律賓連續遭到四個颱風侵襲
The Philippines were attacked by four typhoons in a short time.
家園還來不及重建又遭逢新一波的災難
They didn’t have enough time to fix their houses and here came to another calamity
這是菲律賓風災中人們最難忘記的畫面
This was the scene that people in Philippines would never forget.
我們就這麼旁觀著大自然把一個一個生命從眼前帶走
We acted like a onlooker and saw the power of nature took lives away in front of us
原本的十幾個人最後只剩下三三兩兩渺小的黑點
There were more than ten people here but only two or three people survived in the end
一條橋成了人與世間道別的地標
The bridge, it became the sign to separate people from their family forever
馬尼拉街頭到處是風災留下來的印記
There were all the symbols that the typhoon left on the streets of Manila
市區等待清理的垃圾超過二萬公噸
There were more than twenty thousand tons trash need to be cleaned in the downtown
孩子們與垃圾共處
Children lived with trash
即使無颱風警報的平靜日子
地球仍有災難
土耳其九月某一天
突然下起了大雨
不到二個小時
就淹滅了世界上最古老的伊斯坦堡古城
行駛道路中的公車滅頂
