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標示紅色的表示有問題,大部分的句子不夠簡要,請嘗試再修正。 from 老師 中國大陸22省下起了大豪雨 It rained heavily in 22 provinces in China 不僅四川 湖南 湖北淹大水 Not only flooded in Si-Chuan, Hu-nan, and Hu-bei 連廣東 廣西 江西 貴州 But also Guang-Dong, Guang-Xi, Jiang-Xi and Gui-Zhou were swamped 過去很少出現大水患的長江以南的地區 In the past, there were few floods in southern area of the Changjiang River(揚子江). 降雨量 強度都超越了歷史的極端記錄 Rainfall and strength broke the past record 重慶某一個夜晚 One night at Chongqing city 閃電竟然高達一萬一千四百多次 The thunder had reached up to eleven thousand and four hundred times. 等於平均一分鐘閃電18.3次 The average of thunder there was 18.3 times per minute. 每3秒閃電一次 Every three second came a thunder. 那一夜重慶人徹夜未眠 At that night people who was living in Chongqing city didn’t get good sleep. 2009年11月29日 November 29th, 2009 澳洲沙塵暴 A sandstorm in Australia . 是澳洲近70年來規模最大最嚴重的沙塵暴 It’s the-----In the last 70 years, the Australia had received the most serious and largest sandstorm. [Colors was amazing I never saw that, I’m 72 years old and I never seen that in my life before, is my first time am I, so it is really informality.] 光是雪梨一個城市 Only Sydney , this city 估計飛來四千萬噸的沙塵 There was forty thousand hundred sand can be estimated that flew across the Sydney. 雪梨猶如火星一片紅色 The sky filled with red sand, just like Mars 陸海空交通一片混亂 The transportation of land, sea and air were disorder And the beautiful Sydney Bridge was covered in the sandstorm too Take a sweeping look from Sydney Opera House Only filled with red dust in eyes 台灣也在這一波大自然的搏鬥中倒了下來 Taiwan was defeated in this natural disaster too The typhoon Morakot on August 8th Houses was washed away in front their owner Villages were disappeared in front county magistrate’s eyes Can we check Shiao Lin Village and 五里埔 ??
美麗的地景雪梨大橋也淹沒於漫天風沙之中
從雪梨歌劇院向外眺望
只有滿眼紅色的沙塵
八月八日莫拉克風災
房屋在家人眼前被沖走
村落在縣長眼前消失
我們可以小林看一看 停一下五里埔嗎
