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標示紅色的表示有問題,大部分的句子不夠簡要,請嘗試再修正。 from 老師 就是我們每一個人共同的家地球 As you can see, the planet behind me is our home that all of us shared-The Earth. 當年阿姆斯壯登陸月球的時刻 他回頭看了地球一眼 他說 他從來沒想到地球那麼美麗 它像一顆泫然欲泣的眼淚 The year that Armstrong stepped on the moon and glancing the Earth for a while. He said, “I can’t imagine that it’s so beautiful, just like a drop of falling tear.” 地球孕育人類數千年了 We lived on the earth for thousands of years. 自從人類1750年工業革命之後 地球和人類間展開了微妙的關係 After the Industrial Revolution in 1975, the relationship between human beings and earth began changing. 初期地球容忍 然後 慢慢 慢慢 慢慢 慢慢地 他生氣了 At the very beginning, it accepted. Then, slowly, slowly, slowly it became angry. 1990年是個關鍵的年代 In 1990, it was the crucial year 從1990年開始到2009年 From 1990 to 2009 地球與人類展開了完全不一樣新的一輪搏鬥 The earth starts a completely different wrestle with human beings. 2009年6月起 June 2009 地球與人類展開一輪新的搏鬥 The earth starts a completely different wrestle with human beings 這是2009年6月16日 June 16th, 2009 北京的白天 The daytime in Beijing 暴雨使白晝竟如黑夜 The storm turns daytime to the midnight 中午十二點鐘 Twelve o’clock in the afternoon 天空烏雲罩頂 Dark clouds cover all the sky 民眾誤以為發生了日蝕現象 Most public think it is the solar eclipse phenomena 今天這不會是日蝕吧 肯定 It cannot be solar eclipse today? Definitely 日食啊 不會吧 You mean solar eclipse? I don’t know 2009年7月起 From July 2009
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