January 9, 2011

Cancer - Janet

 

Introduction:

Thesis statement/position/stance/opinion/perspective:

Thesis statement: In western nations cancer is the second most common cause of death, the first being heart disease.

Body paragraph:

Topic sentence (main idea):

There are different types of cancer and some form a solid tumor in an organ of the body.

Supporting sentences:

1.   If for example, someone developed a tumour in his or her intestine, the chances……………… ----exemplification

2.   Cancer that develop in the lymph nodes and blood are particularly dangerous since these are then spread…………..---- cause and effect

Concluding sentence: No.

Body paragraph:

Topic sentence (main idea):

Cancer results when cells divide and grow in an incontrollable way.

Supporting sentences:

1.…..caused by environmental factors such as chemicals, particularly smoking.----exemplification

2.Too much ultraviolet light and other forms of radiation also cause cancer.---- cause and effect

3.For example, a grandmother and granddaughter might both suffer from breast cancer.---- exemplification

Concluding sentence: No.

 Body paragraph:

Topic sentence (main idea):

Western nations do have a considerably higher rate of cancer related deaths compared to Eastern nations.

Supporting sentences:

1.For example, each year about a million women worldwide are diagnosed with breast cancer.----exemplification

2. Breast cancer among women accounts for 24% of all cancer types.---- statistics

3.The high rates are recorded in developed western nations with the lowest rates in Asia and Africa.----comparison and contrast

Concluding sentence: The incidence rates of breast cancer is increasing in western nations.

Conclusion:

Restatement of thesis statement/position/stance/opinion/perspective:

No conclusion.

 

PCQS

 

Prediction:

The reason why so many people suffer from cancer nowadays?

Clarification:

Because different types of cancer form in different way so we should understand why we suffer from cancer. Prevention is better than cure.

Question:

How to develop medical technology to overcome cancer?

Summary:

It’s important to develop technology to cure cancer but people have to form good living habit to prevent from suffering cancer.

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