Obesity - Ava
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Introduction: Thesis statement/position/stance/opinion/perspective: Obesity has reached epidemic proportions and current levels are reducing lives by four to nine months. |
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Body paragraph: Topic sentence (main idea): Obesity has reached epidemic proportions and current levels are reducing lives by four to nine months. Supporting sentences: NO Concluding sentence: This adds up to a 3.3- fold increase in childhood obesity over the past 25 years, mostly due to lifestyles and fast food. |
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Body paragraph: Topic sentence (main idea): Obesity has become a serious social problem affecting both developed and developing countries. Supporting sentences: According to WHO, in 1995, ……200million……18million…….More recently, ……300million……115million sufferers from obesity-related problems.----Chronological order, Statistics Concluding sentence: More recently, the number of obese adults……there are 115 million sufferers from obesity-related problems. |
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Body paragraph: Topic sentence (main idea): The causes of the epidemic are simple; food supply has changed along with the changes in lifestyle. Supporting sentences: The causes of the epidemic are simple; food supply has changed along with the changes in lifestyle.---- Cause & Effect Concluding sentence: NO |
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Body paragraph: Topic sentence (main idea): While men may have higher rates of being overweight, women have higher rates of obesity. Supporting sentences: Including cardiovascular disease, diabetes, and certain forms of cancer.---- Exemplification Concluding sentence: Its health consequences vary from reduced life expectancy to serious chronic conditions that reduce the overall quality of life. |
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Body paragraph: Topic sentence (main idea): Traditional ways of preventing and treating weight gain and obesity put emphasis on changing the behavior of individuals. Supporting sentences: NO Concluding sentence: NO |
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Body paragraph: Topic sentence (main idea): A multifaceted public health policy must be formulated not to mention considerable funding.
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Body paragraph: Topic sentence (main idea): Companies that promote fast foods should be taxed more and these taxes should, in part anyway, provide funds to obesity prevention campaigns. Supporting sentences: Also, since youths are very susceptible to advertising……----Cause & effect Concluding sentence: NO |
PCQS:
Prediction:
The reason why obesity become a modern problem all over the world.
Clarification:
Because obesity is a modern problem in the society, we should figure out the reasons why it becomes a severe illness and how to treat it.
Question:
How to control diet, won't lead to obesity?
Summary:
Obesity is related to our daily dietary habits and excise so we had better pay attention to them if you want to lose weight.
