January 9, 2011

Obesity - Ava

Introduction:

Thesis statement/position/stance/opinion/perspective:

Obesity has reached epidemic proportions and current levels are reducing lives by four to nine months.

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Topic sentence (main idea):

Obesity has reached epidemic proportions and current levels are reducing lives by four to nine months.

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Concluding sentence:

This adds up to a 3.3- fold increase in childhood obesity over the past 25 years, mostly due to lifestyles and fast food.

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Topic sentence (main idea):

Obesity has become a serious social problem affecting both developed and developing countries.

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According to WHO, in 1995, ……200million……18million…….More recently, ……300million……115million sufferers from obesity-related problems.----Chronological order, Statistics

Concluding sentence:

More recently, the number of obese adults……there are 115 million sufferers from obesity-related problems.

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Topic sentence (main idea):

The causes of the epidemic are simple; food supply has changed along with the changes in lifestyle.

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The causes of the epidemic are simple; food supply has changed along with the changes in lifestyle.---- Cause & Effect

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Topic sentence (main idea):

While men may have higher rates of being overweight, women have higher rates of obesity.

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Including cardiovascular disease, diabetes, and certain forms of cancer.---- Exemplification

Concluding sentence:

Its health consequences vary from reduced life expectancy to serious chronic conditions that reduce the overall quality of life.

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Topic sentence (main idea):

Traditional ways of preventing and treating weight gain and obesity put emphasis on changing the behavior of individuals.

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Topic sentence (main idea):

A multifaceted public health policy must be formulated not to mention considerable funding.

 

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Body paragraph:

Topic sentence (main idea):

Companies that promote fast foods should be taxed more and these taxes should, in part anyway, provide funds to obesity prevention campaigns.

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Also, since youths are very susceptible to advertising……----Cause & effect

Concluding sentence: NO

 

PCQS:

Prediction:

    The reason why obesity become a modern problem all over the world.

Clarification:

    Because obesity is a modern problem in the society, we should figure out the reasons why it becomes a severe illness and how to treat it.

Question:

   How to control diet, won't lead to obesity?

Summary:

    Obesity is related to our daily dietary habits and excise so we had better pay attention to them if you want to lose weight.

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