January 9, 2011

Menopause - Crystal

 

Introduction:

Thesis statement/position/stance/opinion/perspective:

In a woman’s life, one of the most important periods is called menopause.

Body paragraph:

Topic sentence (main idea):

About ten years before menopause, many women experience a series of symptoms called pre-menopause symptoms.

Main idea: pre-menopause

Supporting sentences:

Pre-menopause shows the first signs of menopausal transition.

Methods:

1.   It can begin as….forties. (chronological organization)

2.   During….sudden weight gain…etc. (exemplification)

3.   These…caused by…that is… (definition)

Concluding idea:

These symptoms are part of pre-menopause, caused by hormone imbalances, that is, an excess of the hormone estrogen and a deficiency of the hormone progesterone.

 

Conclusion:

Restatement of thesis statement/position/stance/opinion/perspective:

No conclusion.

 

PCQS:

Predicition: I think the topic is going to talk about how menopause affects women and symptoms it may have. Also, I think it may also mention what women should be aware of when they are in menopause.

Clarification: The topic did mention about the effect and symptom caused by menopause; however, it didn’t talk about what women should pay attention to in menopause. What’s more, the topics introduce pre-menopause and provide some statistic related to the difference of menopause because of different factors.

Question: In the first paragraph, the author mention about misconceptions. Why doesn’t the author illustrate what kind of misconceptions are, so that people can have more realization about menopause.

Summary: The topic clearly illustrates cause and symptom of menopause. Also, it mention pre-menopause, which less known by people. In the last paragraph, it talks about in what situation can be called menopause. What’s more, it provides the statistics about what may affect the serious degree of effect caused by menopause.

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