October 12, 2009

夏之雪

心血來潮,
創作了一首詩,
聰明的你,
一定看的出它所代表的意義^^

日的陽光,
衣草的香氣,
盛的綠蔭,
兒水中游,
景斯如畫,
白印我倆。






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    1樓搶頭香

    你這是兩首詩...夏勳懋是新詩,妳是古詩..
    改成這樣如何~

    夏陽高空灑,
    薰草綻香氛,
    茂盛樹如蔭,
    魚兒水中遊。
    美景斯如畫,
    雪白似永恆。

  • 古庭瑄 at October 22, 2009 04:07 AM comment
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