November 16, 2009

邱君(改寫)

 


我帶著沉重的腳步走到了北邊的灘上,而我放眼望了過去,

什麼都沒有,看不到任何景色,

腦海裡想的竟不是景色,而是想自己的愛人什麼時候會出現。

然而我卻把夕陽視為愛人,突然間,

秋風緩緩地吹來,陣陣生涼,身體是暖和的,

但心裡面卻開始慢慢冷卻,少了人可以作伴,

覺得空虛了許多,秋風又在徐徐地吹入,吹入我的心坎裡,

將一顆充滿熱情的心逐漸冷卻,如何將冷卻的心重新燃起,

也許真的需要愛人一路的支持與陪伴下,心才會重生,

可是我等到洞庭湖乾了、落葉飄揚了數萬片,

不管我如何地等、如何地盼望,卻還是等不到愛人的出現,

不過對我來說,為了愛人,我會願意一直地等待下去,

期待你的出現。

如果我真的有喜歡的人 不如放手一搏

只怕我真的做不到  只怕我真的很怕

(湘君跟湘夫人)

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