The letter for University of Bath--討價還價Part I
Dear Claire,
It is really sad for me to know that I got the rejection. University of Bath is my first choice university. Of course, I understand that my GPA and TOEFL score are not good enough, but I did my best to make a compensation for them. Consequently, there are some details that I want to explain my qualification.
First, I realize that my GPA score is 78.54, and it does not meet the requirements : GPA80. But, if you calculate my junior and senior scores during undergraduate, the GPA of the last two yeas is 84.73. I studied harder than any others to get high grades in order to meet the requirement. Except for the GPA score, I also took some courses to prepare for MSc in Marketing such as Marketing Management, International Marketing, Global Competitive Strategy, International Retailing Management, and International Strategic Alliance. Furthermore, I also took " Independent Study " to learn the research methods for dissertation. Hopefully you could apprehend my efforts through the transcript.
Second, My TOEFL score is 237 and TWE : 4. It obviously is not a high score, but it represents that I have essential English ability to study master degree. I know MSc in Marketing programme need fluent English communicating ability to join discussion in class, thus I plan to attend the Pre-Sessional English 2 on July 17th to improve my English. I am quite confident that I will have good performance after ten weeks of Pre-Sessional English.
Most important of all, I’ve compared the MSc or MA in Marketing programme structure of the UK universities, while choosing universities for applying. The MSc in Marketing of the University of Bath totally fits my needs. As my study plan mentioned, I would like to work in a FMCG company after graduating from postgraduate school. The courses, such as Brand Communications, Advanced Business-to-Business Marketing, and Advanced Consumer Behavior, are hard to find in other universities, which provide such courses at the same programme. Because of these, I realize University of Bath is my first choice to study marketing. Without the help of your profession and thorough courses, it is almost impossible to look for other universities to replace University of Bath. Your decision is really important to my life.
I understand there are plenty of applicants you need to verify and it is so rude to ask you to re-consider my qualification. I simply would like you to realize the application of the University of Bath is really important to me. All of my efforts are trying to convince you and self-proving that I do really have the ability to attend the marketing programme. Do please offer me one more chance to re-consider my application. If there were any more information you might required about me, please contact me.
e-mail : @gmail.com
TEL : 886 9
FAX : 886 4
I look forward to your response!
Kind Regards
Yours humbly Chi-Yuan(Eric) Ni
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