October 9, 2009

VERSE

玻璃窗結滿了霧
畫上我們兩人的幸福
每當我依偎在你的溫度
確定這一切不是個錯誤

現在我想你哭訴
你卻希望它快點結束
從何時你變得這麼矛盾
或許擁有過我就該知足

這是我有史以來認為我寫得最好的一次!
請大家多多指教!
幫幫忙,讓我寫得跟好!謝謝!

婽雁

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    1樓搶頭香

    dar 我喜歡!

  • josified at October 9, 2009 05:12 PM comment | prosecute
  • THANK YOU MY DAR

  • Blog Owner at October 9, 2009 08:31 PM Reply
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    HEHH :) nicee nicee hahahaha, Keepitup
    yooo ;D

  • mandy wong at October 10, 2009 10:32 PM comment | email
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