February 7, 2009

這是獻給我父母的詩~

看著你棕色的頭髮
帶著一點淡淡陽光的色彩
當你走過我身旁時
秀髮如絲綢般輕輕的劃過我羞澀的臉頰
你的笑容
你的雙眼
你的眉
你的唇
都深深的烙在我心裡

看著你笑
使我有了生命
看著你哭
使我有存在的價值

如今
你枕在我的懷裡
熟睡的你是如此的甜蜜
晨光映在你紅潤的雙頰
使之更為動人

親愛的愛人啊
我不能說
我們能相愛到地球毀滅
可是我相信
我對你的愛已足夠使
浩瀚的宇宙
甘拜下風

(有沒有太感性了一點~我寫完也有被我自己嚇到!)

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  • 啊~乾淨利落的答案~我喜歡!

  • Blog Owner at February 8, 2009 09:42 PM Reply
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    你是在寫給情人嗎= =

    太感性了= =


    可以去當詩人了
    :D

  • RINDY at February 8, 2009 12:09 AM comment
  • 這是寫給我爸媽的~
    詩人?
    我的功力還沒到那裡~
    有請老師多請教請教~

  • Blog Owner at February 8, 2009 10:46 AM Reply
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    看不出來是妳寫的...

  • ej2j6s06 at February 8, 2009 09:47 AM comment | prosecute
  • 真的嗎?
    但這真的是我寫的喔~

  • Blog Owner at February 8, 2009 10:48 AM Reply
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    我建議妳去看看一個天才國3時寫的詩
    http://www.wretch.cc/blog/musicCHING/20127912
    http://www.wretch.cc/blog/musicCHING/20127960
    http://www.wretch.cc/blog/musicCHING/20159284
    http://www.wretch.cc/blog/musicCHING/20159479

  • musicCHING at February 8, 2009 05:41 PM comment | prosecute
  • 是你寫的嗎?
    好強喔~!

  • Blog Owner at February 8, 2009 09:43 PM Reply
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    沒辦法
    那時候剛好遇到啦

    沒想太多就在一起

    最後還是不了了之......

    高中好想要XX啊

  • musicCHING at February 12, 2009 11:40 AM comment | prosecute
  • 交不到啦~!
    繼續當你的單身貴族~

  • Blog Owner at February 12, 2009 10:35 PM Reply
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    放心!
    目標高二把到學妹

  • musicCHING at February 15, 2009 05:31 PM comment | prosecute
  • 有學妹喜歡你喔~ =.=
    八成是近視

  • Blog Owner at February 15, 2009 05:46 PM Reply
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    說話好聽點啊!

    奇怪?
    是不是近視妳管那麼多幹嘛?
    正就好啊

  • musicCHING at February 17, 2009 11:05 AM comment | prosecute
  • 哪個~下次給我看看~!

  • Blog Owner at February 17, 2009 10:36 PM Reply
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    不用.......
    想太多了妳!
    幹嘛要禱告

  • musicCHING at February 24, 2009 11:04 AM comment | prosecute
  • 可憐她~

  • Blog Owner at February 24, 2009 09:38 PM Reply
  • 呵呵......

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  • 看到你就醒了........

  • Blog Owner at March 10, 2009 10:55 PM Reply
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    Wow amy...I am SHOCKED!!!!! very impressive....

    ps..i really miss you guys.........

  • cindypopo at March 14, 2009 03:12 PM comment | prosecute
  • mee too baby~!
    I miss you a lot~!!!!!
    for knowing me so long, you don't know I have a warm heart?

  • Blog Owner at March 14, 2009 06:12 PM Reply
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    去死吧妳.......
    我幼小心靈受到大大打擊!!

  • musicCHING at March 17, 2009 11:21 AM comment
  • 那我也幫你收收驚ㄅ.....

  • Blog Owner at March 17, 2009 10:22 PM Reply
  • ok~就這麼說定了~喵~!

  • Blog Owner at March 28, 2009 09:37 PM Reply
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    約時間吧
    哈哈~幹嘛學喵喵?

  • musicCHING at March 28, 2009 11:02 PM comment | prosecute
  • 啊~你是沒看過神奇寶貝喔!!!!

  • Blog Owner at April 3, 2009 10:19 PM Reply
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    有啊
    我有童年的好不好
    皮卡皮卡

  • musicCHING at April 3, 2009 11:00 PM comment | prosecute
  • 啊~好討厭的感覺喔~!!!!

  • Blog Owner at April 4, 2009 10:39 PM Reply
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    我哪有

    是實話欸!
    奇怪

  • musicCHING at April 30, 2009 10:24 PM comment | prosecute
  • 啊~!好妙喔.......=3=

  • Blog Owner at May 7, 2009 10:23 PM Reply
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    妙??
    哪裡妙

    今天考完去哪嗨啊
    我今天喊到破聲

  • musicCHING at May 7, 2009 10:54 PM comment | prosecute
  • 看棒球吼~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    我都沒看過.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Blog Owner at May 8, 2009 12:30 AM Reply
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    哪天啊??
    ((突然想到

    有逛街也有看球賽
    行程好滿

  • musicCHING at May 10, 2009 04:56 PM comment | prosecute
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